Thursday, October 11, 2012

Teens Can Write, Too! Blog Chain

I'm a part of the wonderful Teens Can Write, Too! blog chain this month, in preparation for the absolute chaos of next month. The prompt was thus:

“What are you writing for NaNoWriMo? Briefly explain how this book idea come about. Then write a mock first page for the novel.”

I have to admit, I didn't - and right now, as I write these words - still have no clue what my NaNo is going to be about. I should probably set up another list of silly subtitles, as I did in August. That seemed to work pretty well. But this first page that I'm about to write may not have anything to do with the novel I end up producing. I'm a pantser, every time. Of course, this means that the middle part of the prompt is going to be answered last, once I know what I wrote for the page. Because I'm cool like that.




Hello. I am nobody. I am a figment of imagination, a thought floating on the breeze. I’ve been this way for a while now, but it hasn’t always been like this. I used to be completely corporeal, a person with hands and feet and a face. That was good. I never knew how much I would miss having a face until suddenly I didn’t have anything to have a face on. Faces are good – faces are important. Faces are what you keep yourself behind. 

This is the story of how I died, about life after death, and why being a poltergeist is harder than it is usually made out to be.
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Back when I was a real person, I was somebody. I was important. I was a lady – I mean that in the literal sense, as in a woman of noble birth – with an interest in all things mechanical. I was tutored from a young age in the mathematical arts. This was more unusual than it may seem to the privileged reader of today – few of my companions during my youth knew anything beyond the sums necessary to run a household. It was not a special honor for myself, however, but a preventative measure to root out insanity, for my mother believed that my father was a mad rogue, and wished to prevent my following down that same path. I will admit that if I did inherit any such insanity, the mathematical training was successful in rooting it out. 

A new insanity took its place, however. I dreamt of inventions that would never exist in my lifetime, of machines that could calculate and more. I dreamt of numbers, dancing and forming new things beyond what could be imagined. Numbers were my plaything, and I, their mistress. A dear friend once called me the “Enchantress of Numbers.” I suppose that may not be the worst description of it. I know there were few enough others who understood what I did.

I was a cursed enchantress, however. I remember far more time spent ill than well. I died young, even for my era – not even a full four decades of age. I was scared of death – terrified. I even underwent a conversion of faith in my final corporeal days. As far as I can tell, that was just wasted breath. I’m simply a mind floating alone in the world, now. There’s no one else, and nothing else. Rather boring, to be honest.



... Nope. Still no idea where that came from. Might keep it though. The idea of Lovelace's ghost hanging around through computers might be fun to play around with. A lot of research, though. Should I keep it? Should I throw it out? Keep in mind, this beginning is going to be completely revamped. It's sort of awful right now.


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The theme for this month’s blog chain is…
“What are you writing for NaNoWriMo? Briefly explain how this book idea come about. Then write a mock first page for the novel.”
Participants:
Want to follow our blog chain? Here are the participating parties, day by day:
October 5th – http://www.lilyjenness.blogspot.com  – Lily’s Notes in the Margins
October 6th – http://realityisimaginary.blogspot.com – Reality Is Imaginary
October 7th – http://onelifeglory.blogspot.ca – One Life Story
October 8th – http://gabrielletheauthoress.wordpress.com – Of a Writerly Sort
October 9th – http://towerofplot.blogspot.co.uk – The Leaning Tower of Plot
October 10th – http://insideliamsbrain.wordpress.com – This Page Intentionally Left Blank
October 11th – http://whatupdates.blogspot.com – What Updates?
October 12th – http://miriamjoywrites.wordpress.com – Miriam Joy Writes
October 13th – http://cinderscoria.blogspot.com – Between the Lines
October 14th – http://weirdalocity.wordpress.com – Inside the Junk Door
October 15th – http://musingsfromnevillesnavel.wordpress.com – Musings From Neville’s Navel
October 16th – http://kirstenwrites.wordpress.com – Kirsten Writes!
October 17th – http://mirrormadeofwords.wordpress.com – A Mirror Made of Words
October 18th – http://theteenagewriter.wordpress.com – The Teenage Writer
October 19th – http://platonicpencil.wordpress.com – Platonic Pencil
October 20th – http://markobrienwrites.blogspot.com – Mark O’Brien Writes
October 21st – http://amandafoody.blogspot.com – It’s All In My Head
October 22nd – http://incessantdroningofaboredwriter.wordpress.com – The Incessant Droning of a Bored Writer
October 23rd – http://teenscanwritetoo.wordpress.com – Teens Can Write, Too! (We will be announcing the topic for next month’s chain)

8 comments:

  1. Haha, I love the idea of our friendly ghost hanging about through computers - could make for some hilarious moments if she meets anyone via technology. I can just imagine her posessing Omegle or Cleverbot or one of those AI or stranger chat things.

    Ah, a pantser are you? I've never been able to do that - I'm a very twitchy plotter myself. Still, best of luck with your endeavour. If you run with the idea you put there (which I totally think you should) it could make for an awesome story!

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    1. If I have too tight of an outline, I find that everything feels contrived. It's far more fun to just write and find out where I end up. Little Miss Poltergeist may end up getting thrown out of the spotlight by Mr. Babbage, or some other character. I have no clue.

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  2. I agree with Charley, that idea sounds great.

    Good luck with NaNo!

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  3. I do like the poltergeist. Good luck with whatever you do.

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    1. I like the poltergeist, too. I'm thinking of her reactions to the modern-day internet - how would the daughter of Byron react to, say, chatspeak?

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  4. Haha, I love the randomness here! Sounds like a good book, and I'm excited to hear how it turns out!

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  5. Can I just nerd out for a moment over the fact that it was Ada's ghost? I was very excited when I clued in, and even more so when you confirmed it.

    Anyways, I think the idea has lots of cool potential... I wonder if it might help to consider why she's still wandering, since typically spirits are said to hang about cause of some unfinished business.

    Good luck with NaNo, whatever idea you choose!

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    1. I'm probably going to hold on to this idea until Camp Nano, when I'll have time to actually do the research I need. But Ada Lovelace is one of my favorite women in history, especially because she managed to be a nerd before nerds were even a thing.

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